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# Fluency

In Korea, we don’t have so many new COVID patients everyday. When I ask my friends and family, they just wait and see because that kind of contamination is not severe. I just protect myself as usual.

•  Since we do not have as many new COVID patients (new COVID cases) everyday in Korea, many of my friends and family prefer to wait to be vaccinated and keep up with social distancing. 

We also don’t have the vaccine. I heard that Korean government did not take aggressive action to take the vaccine. Then they realized that to get the vaccine is very expensive, so they have to wait a long time.

•  We also do not have the vaccine as the Korean government has not taken aggressive action (measures)
  to secure it, so now they have realized the vaccine is expensive and that they will have to wait.